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Della de la de Ladell

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Hey, it only took me all day to finish this.

Nothing much. ~
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

The background is outstanding, as well as the choice in colors for everything. The only helpful criticism I could give you, is to work on the hair a little more from the top. The shades, and the flow is just amazing, but it doesn't look natural in a sense... It looks too stiff. It's not a crazy hairstyle like Goku's where it is gravity defined, so it's a little in-between. The neck is just slightly longer than it should be.

Over all, I think it's amazing, just a few little things to work on <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/> This is also my first critique, so I'm sorry I was a little harsh. I do not base any of this off of my own abilities though because I can't even figure out the backgrounds which are just white as of now....